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Cry: Charge by Kiwa007 Cry: Charge by Kiwa007
i fucked up the timing :/ sorry...
gosh, im so tired x_x


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:iconantonsmelo:
Although I personalty don't have an excess of animating experience, I can appreciate the time that must be put into animations. As a Cry fan I greatly enjoy your work and rarely find errors unless they where pointed out. Here I think that while everything was awesome, the beginning is a bit of a buzz-kill. Cry looks too stiff and lifeless, unlike on-guard like I assume you Imagined him. This can be remedied by adding another keyframe in between the first and second, preferably with Cry bending his arms just a little at the elbows. The acceleration is perfect, and his reach is well timed, though he seems to jump after making the turn. Overall excellent work!

Looking forward to seeing more Crynime
-Anton
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:iconhm-dragon-dreamer:
I'm no good in animating humans, it's a thing I find particulary hard to do.
So for that, I must praise you, you're doing a really good job.

I like the pastel color scheme you've chosen for this one, the shadows and the simple background work well with it. The line work and coloration are spot on (as usual).

I'm having some problems with the timing, as you've mentioned yourself.
He seems to be moving way to fast. In my opnion it would've looked better, if you would add a few more frames in the running sequence, the movement would've looked smoother and less fast paced.
I' malso having a problem with the last two or three frames. The hand reaching sequence seems like it's missing a frame inbetween, it's a bit "jumpy" in my opinion.

Still, you've done an amazing job and your animations allways help bring charaters to life.
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TheJinxlingJinx Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  New member
COOL!!!
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:iconthedragonofdeath:
TheDragonOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Facepalms from cry.
XD
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blue730 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Me in an awkward moment: Um...CHAAARGE!
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animegirl3546 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
your art is so awesome!~
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Cheesecake2001 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
can I use this as my webcam?
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Kiwa007 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sure~
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Cheesecake2001 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
thank u!
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angel-lefey Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I still say this is cool
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Determinator12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
This reminds me of the ending of Paranormal Activityscared.... "the 2nd" 
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Yellow-Vixen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is more a high 5 than a charge............a charge high 5! a charge 5!!!
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