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Cry: Charge by Kiwa007 Cry: Charge by Kiwa007
i fucked up the timing :/ sorry...
gosh, im so tired x_x


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:iconantonsmelo:
Although I personalty don't have an excess of animating experience, I can appreciate the time that must be put into animations. As a Cry fan I greatly enjoy your work and rarely find errors unless they where pointed out. Here I think that while everything was awesome, the beginning is a bit of a buzz-kill. Cry looks too stiff and lifeless, unlike on-guard like I assume you Imagined him. This can be remedied by adding another keyframe in between the first and second, preferably with Cry bending his arms just a little at the elbows. The acceleration is perfect, and his reach is well timed, though he seems to jump after making the turn. Overall excellent work!

Looking forward to seeing more Crynime
-Anton
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I'm no good in animating humans, it's a thing I find particulary hard to do.
So for that, I must praise you, you're doing a really good job.

I like the pastel color scheme you've chosen for this one, the shadows and the simple background work well with it. The line work and coloration are spot on (as usual).

I'm having some problems with the timing, as you've mentioned yourself.
He seems to be moving way to fast. In my opnion it would've looked better, if you would add a few more frames in the running sequence, the movement would've looked smoother and less fast paced.
I' malso having a problem with the last two or three frames. The hand reaching sequence seems like it's missing a frame inbetween, it's a bit "jumpy" in my opinion.

Still, you've done an amazing job and your animations allways help bring charaters to life.
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:icondeterminator12:
This reminds me of the ending of Paranormal Activityscared.... "the 2nd" 
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Yellow-Vixen Mar 12, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
this is more a high 5 than a charge............a charge high 5! a charge 5!!!
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TheVivster Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
I think the timing is cool... as though he were mad.
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CR4ZYF0X Jan 26, 2014  Student Artist
*hugs Cry*
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fern-7 Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha. The only thing I can think of looking at this is Bioshock pt 9. :D
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PikachuInc Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hes like that one scp blink and he glomps ya :|
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LoopyPanda Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
u kno he dead
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:iconlenardsalceda:
LenardSalceda Jan 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Nightmares nightmares PewDieCry nightmares....
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:icontideburst:
TideBurst Dec 11, 2013   General Artist
HES GOING FOR DA ASS GRAB OH SHIET!!XD(i dont hate cry hes awesome...mez random though//)
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OneWingedNekoCas Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I uh....CHAAAAAAARGE!!!!!
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