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Cry: Jump by Kiwa007 Cry: Jump by Kiwa007
I´m sorry if the timing´s a bit off :/
tumblr: [link]
background reference (because what are clouds x_x) : [link]

EDIT: I WANTED THE FALLING TO BE QUICK D': i wanted it that way...it was supposed to be sudden...

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Cry´s YT channel: [link]
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:iconcodekitten:
I really like this animation, though it feels a bit unfinished or rushed. Though i get that life can be very busy so maybe you didn't have a lot of time to iron out what I am going to point out I see wrong with the image.

Pros:
The first half of the animation is great, looks fluid and the coloring is well done as well as the background.

Cons:
The ending of the animation seems a bit... off to me. The landing seems to have no bounce at all (unless there is reason for this), the body would give a little in landing from any height.

Also the drawstrings on the hoodie are bugging me. Given the position that the character seems to end the landing in I think they should be more dangling or forward.

Additional thought:

Maybe add a little extra animation to the image? Like the clouds moving a little would bring it to life more.
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Overall, it's a decent piece. The colouring, the consistency, the anatomy, movement etc is well-done.

However, there are several things that are completely off.

First of all, the animation sequence. There are frames missing. That's the why it looks "rushed". More specifically, the frames where the character is getting closer to the ground, and the character landing on the groud (wether it's landing onto something, there still has to be a contraction sequence. No but's), and a the reincorporation sequence (from the reaction from landing up to the moment it reaches the resting position).

Withouth these, it looks like he suddenly warped from far away to right infront of us. You can clearly see it.

Another thing of is the illumination. The guy side we're seeing is landing contrary to the light source. There's an excess of light coming Darwin knows where from into the final pose. No excuses. If is he landing near another light source is no excuse because it's not present anywhere in the animation. And if it is explained anywhere off of the animation, then we care not for it. If it isn't in the actual thing, it doesn't exist.

Frames missing, and excessivelt unexplained light. These are the main issue with this animation.
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happyfangirlsofun Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  New member Student Writer
Jaydyn: Cry! Where are you!
Cry: *jumps on me* Sup?
Jaydyn: *screams and falls on the ground* The sky that's what's up, now get off me. *giggles*
Cry: *gets off me and helps me up* Sorry...
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Starling405 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
he fell from the sky ON A BALL OF FIRE
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:iconshadowsilversonic867:
sonic heroes kkkkk
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intheskygirl Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG
ARE YOU DRAWING FOR CRYANIME!!!
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KittyLover40 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Artist
Hey wher- WHAT THE HECK
Cry:hello friend
Me:WHAT THE HECK CRY!!!!!!!! WHY U NO TELL ME!!!!!! >.<
Cry:sorry *troll face mask*
Me:*faceplam*
The End 
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AnaPegasusX Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Cry, where are you?

Cry: *jumps from the sky* sup fatty.

DAMN, CRY! MY CAMERA!!
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TheDragonOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
[Cry:] [jumps from sky]
[Me:] I like trains.
[Cry:] [jumps away again]

[Train comes]

...
XD
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blue730 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Me: Cry where are you?
Cry: *Jumps out of the sky and lands on me* Sup?
Me: :O___O: 
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g-master-artist Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
a little jumpy but niice
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angelebonyrae Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
It's like he is say WWWHHHOOOAAAA (lands) ....Hi
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