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Cry: Jump by Kiwa007 Cry: Jump by Kiwa007
I´m sorry if the timing´s a bit off :/
tumblr: [link]
background reference (because what are clouds x_x) : [link]

EDIT: I WANTED THE FALLING TO BE QUICK D': i wanted it that way...it was supposed to be sudden...

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Cry´s YT channel: [link]
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I really like this animation, though it feels a bit unfinished or rushed. Though i get that life can be very busy so maybe you didn't have a lot of time to iron out what I am going to point out I see wrong with the image.

Pros:
The first half of the animation is great, looks fluid and the coloring is well done as well as the background.

Cons:
The ending of the animation seems a bit... off to me. The landing seems to have no bounce at all (unless there is reason for this), the body would give a little in landing from any height.

Also the drawstrings on the hoodie are bugging me. Given the position that the character seems to end the landing in I think they should be more dangling or forward.

Additional thought:

Maybe add a little extra animation to the image? Like the clouds moving a little would bring it to life more.
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Overall, it's a decent piece. The colouring, the consistency, the anatomy, movement etc is well-done.

However, there are several things that are completely off.

First of all, the animation sequence. There are frames missing. That's the why it looks "rushed". More specifically, the frames where the character is getting closer to the ground, and the character landing on the groud (wether it's landing onto something, there still has to be a contraction sequence. No but's), and a the reincorporation sequence (from the reaction from landing up to the moment it reaches the resting position).

Withouth these, it looks like he suddenly warped from far away to right infront of us. You can clearly see it.

Another thing of is the illumination. The guy side we're seeing is landing contrary to the light source. There's an excess of light coming Darwin knows where from into the final pose. No excuses. If is he landing near another light source is no excuse because it's not present anywhere in the animation. And if it is explained anywhere off of the animation, then we care not for it. If it isn't in the actual thing, it doesn't exist.

Frames missing, and excessivelt unexplained light. These are the main issue with this animation.
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animeparty14 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist
that is pretty cool animations you done there! how do you do it?
how long did it take?
sorry i have lots of questions ;-)
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:iconoverkilldynasty:
OverkillDynasty Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015
That would literally give me a heart attack if he ever did this in real life to me!
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:iconwritterinthearthat:
WritterInTheArtHat Featured By Owner May 19, 2015
BAH! Oh, hello Cry :3
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wheatleykawaii Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yep i do agree with the critiques the first time i saw this the middle of the animation looks rushed and it is missing frames but overall it is good 
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RemlitMilo Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Student Artist
My friend ended up yelling this when she saw this:

"MAKING MY WAY DOWNTOWN, WALKIN' FAST, FACES PASS AND I'M HOMEBOUND! DODODODODODO!"
I laughed pretty hard.
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happyfangirlsofun Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Student Writer
Jaydyn: Cry! Where are you!
Cry: *jumps on me* Sup?
Jaydyn: *screams and falls on the ground* The sky that's what's up, now get off me. *giggles*
Cry: *gets off me and helps me up* Sorry...
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Starling405 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
he fell from the sky ON A BALL OF FIRE
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:iconshadowsilversonic867:
sonic heroes kkkkk
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:iconintheskygirl:
intheskygirl Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG
ARE YOU DRAWING FOR CRYANIME!!!
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:iconkittylover40:
KittyLover40 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Artist
Hey wher- WHAT THE HECK
Cry:hello friend
Me:WHAT THE HECK CRY!!!!!!!! WHY U NO TELL ME!!!!!! >.<
Cry:sorry *troll face mask*
Me:*faceplam*
The End 
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AnaPegasusX Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Cry, where are you?

Cry: *jumps from the sky* sup fatty.

DAMN, CRY! MY CAMERA!!
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:iconthedragonofdeath:
TheDragonOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
[Cry:] [jumps from sky]
[Me:] I like trains.
[Cry:] [jumps away again]

[Train comes]

...
XD
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Me: Cry where are you?
Cry: *Jumps out of the sky and lands on me* Sup?
Me: :O___O: 
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g-master-artist Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
a little jumpy but niice
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:iconangelebonyrae:
angelebonyrae Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
It's like he is say WWWHHHOOOAAAA (lands) ....Hi
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:iconwheeslides:
Wheeslides Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Me: CRY! WHERE THE FUDGE BISCUITS ARE YOU?! 
 *Cry jumps out of the sun/sky* 
 Cry: You rang? 
 Me: 0.0 
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8Darkness-Seeker8 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
I'm just like
hey... is there something in th skHOLYSH*T
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:iconxxjollynekoxx:
xXjollynekoXx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IN YO FACE!
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:iconblackrose3652:
BlackRose3652 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
and somebody better put you back into your place! XD
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:iconremlitmilo:
RemlitMilo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Artist
Me: *laughs* Ever so "scary"!
InsAnity: lawl! XD
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:iconhichigo-kurosaki:
Hichigo-Kurosaki Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Cryotic~
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:iconrockstarofresiclan:
RockstarOfResiClan Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
LOOKS LIKE TEAM CRY'S BLASTING OFF A- oh
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:iconremlitmilo:
RemlitMilo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Artist
XD
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:iconlenardsalceda:
LenardSalceda Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
F*ck gave me a heart attack....
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:iconcouplecakes:
CoupleCakes Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this made me giggle <3
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:iconshadowpocky:
ShadowPocky Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same here 
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:iconcathydirkstriders:
CathyDirkStriders Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*Cry suddenly jump from the sky infront of me* Hi Cry :3
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:iconpochipochiao:
PochiPochiAo Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013   General Artist
i actually jumped when i saw this
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:iconshadowpocky:
ShadowPocky Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So I'm not the only one? JOLLY! :D
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:iconpochipochiao:
PochiPochiAo Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014   General Artist
XD
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:iconshadowpocky:
ShadowPocky Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconpochipochiao:
PochiPochiAo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014   General Artist
XDD
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:iconangeloflight22:
AngelofLight22 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
hes like
Cry:*lands on you* hello,friend :)
you: x_x hey cry
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:iconne0n-rainb0w:
ne0n-rainb0w Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
its like..-fly fly fly LAND- sup.
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:iconisabellatherayperson:
IsabellatheRayperson Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013   Artist
lol wut? : D
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BrochachoTheNooblet Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'M SPIDER-CRY, BITCHES!!!~! XD
My laptop was loading slowly, so I just saw the background, but then I saw a strange figure in the distance of the sun, and then before I knew it, Cry jumped on me! That gave me a heart attack, man!!!
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Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
He moves as fast as Slenderman
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:iconsouls-are-good3:
souls-are-good3 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
Hello there cry~
OMG it scared me when cry popped up on my screen ^·^;
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:iconbewd1:
BEWD1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
its raining Cry ^3^
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Sanluris Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hmm!! I think this is why you're not supposed to look into the sun. :boing:
Very cool! :clap:
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:iconsparxpixel:
SparxPixel Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SURPRISE MOTHAFAWKA.
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:iconbrochachothenooblet:
BrochachoTheNooblet Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!~!
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:iconkamimi-pipo:
Kamimi-PiPo Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HEEEEERE'S CRY!
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CoolNowDie Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol the backround looks the same as the reference  good job
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:iconbrofist12342:
Brofist12342 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
BLEH! He's imitating the frog form "The witch's house" D: Poor frog D:
:iconcryaoticplz: :iconsaysplz: I feel like SUCH an asshole D: :iconsaysendplz:
God I was laughing so hard when he said that XD
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pusheenthecat0403 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
if cry was falling, i'd like to let him fall on me...wait that sounded wrong
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Stephano23 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This would be epic for an intro :D!
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:iconbrochachothenooblet:
BrochachoTheNooblet Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IKR! I hope this will be included in the opening of Crynime!
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:iconhaiakatwarrior:
HAiAkatwarrior Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Artist
YOU CALL THAT BROFISTING, CRY? XD
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gamergirl1313 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
I guess Cry is really good at Leap Frog :3
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