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Cry: Slash WIP by Kiwa007 Cry: Slash WIP by Kiwa007
s just a WIP, guys....ill change some stuff before i color it ^^
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Nice Job, its clean and clear to see the action. It's been seen before so that's what makes this not completely original. Visual is amazing but I am guessing what other critiques might say is "color?" pffth you are aware of that though. It's simple and not too complicated. Technique is impressive needless to say, it is not too special. And since I watch too many cartoons with action it made a decent appeal.

Color would make an impact.
Special effects would add on to the categories.
And work a little more with drawing the back side of the hand.

Hope this critique helped you.
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This is done very well. First, the way you drew him is accurate to the proportions of the human body and etc...
second, the motion is amazing. So smooth; very little frame skipping. It's obvious that this took some good effort...or maybe it wasn't that hard and you're just awesome that way ^^
The only constructive criticism I may have is the fact that there's a portion of it where the left arm isn't the same thickness as the rest of the lines.......but I don't know. Maybe that was intentional.
I think coloring this would be a great idea. It's wonderful now, but color would add a whole other dimension to it :3
I'm sure Cry would be pleased if he saw this :D Great job!!
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kyle-culver Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Professional Filmographer
Featured this piece in my journal :)
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Thank you!
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MirRoriel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude.... how?!!!!!!????????
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BethanyAngelstar Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh my gosh, this is just so AWESOME! I love your animation!!!!

I hope you don't mind, but I took the WIP animation, imported into my photoshop, and used it as a base for my own animation. I give you credit for the animation itself. I just used my own character and used your animation for the basic movements. [link]

If you wish for me to take it down, I will, but I thought I'd show this to you to let you know I used your animation for some help in mine. ^^; Your animation is just amazing, and it's AWESOME how you get such smooth animation! (even using your animation for reference, mine's STILL choppy! XP )
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dreamitupfoever Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Has cry ever seen these before!? He should! You should be thanked for the amazing works you do of him.
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GenevieveHigurashi Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
I love the style, I don't think you could've done better
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mythical27 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
O.O you used kirito's moves :D
Cry is wielding the Elucidator and the Dark Repluser
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mancan71 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hello there I'm here to ask if you can maybe help out a cry fanbase on the website "reddit". it's a place where you can post fan art or make discussions, but sadly it's dying. Is it alright if I link your art in the fanbase area for cry? full credit will be given to you and it will link right to your actual deveation. I will not steal art, I just wish to share it with the dying fanbase on that site.
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Kiwa007 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure :) thatd actually be very nice, thank you :heart: :hug:
i hope it will help the fanbase there :w00t:
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mancan71 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no problem. ^_^ you have a lot of cry art, and that's what that fanbase needs. :)

thank you so much. :) keep it up.
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Castel-Eown Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Wish I could animate like that D:
Great job.
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RPGSharpShooter Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Artist
I could watch this all day..
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RoxyChick2003 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would I be able to use this as a loose reference for an animation of my own? I don't mean by tracing or anything, just referencing the motions by looking at them.
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goldenshoyru09 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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I colored it!! :DDDD
Took me almost all day, but it was worth it. X333
There's one layer where I messed up terribly, and you can tell in the animation, but I am overly too lazy to fix it.
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goldenshoyru09 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you mind if I also color this?
^3^
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ScarlettGrotesque Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh that looks cool
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Ranki-Chee Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Ahh Cry~ :333
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Drake-Ryu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Looks great! Can't Wait!
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melloxme Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:ninjabattle:
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Ugana-like-me Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
So........awsome
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snowfeatherr Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome ninja
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Aleude Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooow this is so awesomeee *w*
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Juuku-Coffee Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
:D this is awesome! how many slides does this have?
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kadcherry Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorta like Kirito's Dual Blades attack...
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trinity-angel777 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Great animation! Very fluid movements, well done!
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AntonSmelo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Kirito's Arena battle with that guy who's name I will not mention b/c it turned out that he was more of an asshole than we originally thought. Awesome work! :hooray:


PS What programs did you use?
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fuckingchairmode Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
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marisss-shonen-ai Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
woowww looks amazing!!!!!! :iconiloveitplz:
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ArtisticAxis Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
o_o
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orhinoku Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
the mask XD NO EXPRESSIONS ARE NEEDED!
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xBehindBlueEyes Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
wow this is epic
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Oback-Barama Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like when Kirito was slashing Heathcliff.
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AntonSmelo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, That's what I meant to say! High five! *holds out hand* Don't leave me hanging.
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Oback-Barama Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw yeah SAO
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AntonSmelo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait for Gungale to come out. :)
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Oback-Barama Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw yeah
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AntonSmelo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lawls 8-)
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Playcircus Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Take a geek, and remove his intelligence; you will have Cry.
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kaedesasaki Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Artist
Sick!
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TyggFestival Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
dude, this is literally amazing. Like it's fucking crazy adsfghjk
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DARKBRlNGER Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
pure epicness...
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Psychotic-Love Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like playing video-games naow. :meow:
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Ailanista Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
Excellent work! The swift yet simplisitc motions expressed in this animation capture the attention superbly. :D
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Ranivius Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very inspirational. As I look at this I wanna make some animations too! Thank you! Animation is really great part of art. It can express more emotions than any other medias.
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viruma Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like this. this is somehow so cool. :-----]
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NekoNinja13 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
i love it
can't wait to see it fiished
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Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((This. Freaking awesome. :heart:))
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angel-lefey Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is slice and dice time.... who wants salsa?
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11newells Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY HAS CRY NOT COMMENT AND FAV ALL OF YOUR AWESOME WORKS!!!!!!! your so awsome its becouse of you that I'm trying to do gifs.
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chibimeganekko-tan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
the animation is so smooth :heart:
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personofboredom Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Dual wielding is for badasses. 'Nuff said.
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