This is done very well. First, the way you drew him is accurate to the proportions of the human body and etc... second, the motion is amazing. So smooth; very little frame skipping. It's obvious that this took some good effort...or maybe it wasn't that hard and you're just awesome that way ^^ The only constructive criticism I may have is the fact that there's a portion of it where the left arm isn't the same thickness as the rest of the lines.......but I don't know. Maybe that was intentional. I think coloring this would be a great idea. It's wonderful now, but color would add a whole other dimension to it :3 I'm sure Cry would be pleased if he saw this Great job!!
Nice Job, its clean and clear to see the action. It's been seen before so that's what makes this not completely original. Visual is amazing but I am guessing what other critiques might say is "color?" pffth you are aware of that though. It's simple and not too complicated. Technique is impressive needless to say, it is not too special. And since I watch too many cartoons with action it made a decent appeal.
Color would make an impact. Special effects would add on to the categories. And work a little more with drawing the back side of the hand.
hello there I'm here to ask if you can maybe help out a cry fanbase on the website "reddit". it's a place where you can post fan art or make discussions, but sadly it's dying. Is it alright if I link your art in the fanbase area for cry? full credit will be given to you and it will link right to your actual deveation. I will not steal art, I just wish to share it with the dying fanbase on that site.
Would I be able to use this as a loose reference for an animation of my own? I don't mean by tracing or anything, just referencing the motions by looking at them.
I colored it!! DDD Took me almost all day, but it was worth it. X333 There's one layer where I messed up terribly, and you can tell in the animation, but I am overly too lazy to fix it.
second, the motion is amazing. So smooth; very little frame skipping. It's obvious that this took some good effort...or maybe it wasn't that hard and you're just awesome that way ^^
The only constructive criticism I may have is the fact that there's a portion of it where the left arm isn't the same thickness as the rest of the lines.......but I don't know. Maybe that was intentional.
I think coloring this would be a great idea. It's wonderful now, but color would add a whole other dimension to it :3
I'm sure Cry would be pleased if he saw this
Color would make an impact.
Special effects would add on to the categories.
And work a little more with drawing the back side of the hand.
Hope this critique helped you.
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