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Cry: Slash WIP by Kiwa007 Cry: Slash WIP by Kiwa007
s just a WIP, guys....ill change some stuff before i color it ^^
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Nice Job, its clean and clear to see the action. It's been seen before so that's what makes this not completely original. Visual is amazing but I am guessing what other critiques might say is "color?" pffth you are aware of that though. It's simple and not too complicated. Technique is impressive needless to say, it is not too special. And since I watch too many cartoons with action it made a decent appeal.

Color would make an impact.
Special effects would add on to the categories.
And work a little more with drawing the back side of the hand.

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This is done very well. First, the way you drew him is accurate to the proportions of the human body and etc...
second, the motion is amazing. So smooth; very little frame skipping. It's obvious that this took some good effort...or maybe it wasn't that hard and you're just awesome that way ^^
The only constructive criticism I may have is the fact that there's a portion of it where the left arm isn't the same thickness as the rest of the lines.......but I don't know. Maybe that was intentional.
I think coloring this would be a great idea. It's wonderful now, but color would add a whole other dimension to it :3
I'm sure Cry would be pleased if he saw this :D Great job!!
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MirRoriel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude.... how?!!!!!!????????
BethanyAngelstar Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh my gosh, this is just so AWESOME! I love your animation!!!!

I hope you don't mind, but I took the WIP animation, imported into my photoshop, and used it as a base for my own animation. I give you credit for the animation itself. I just used my own character and used your animation for the basic movements. [link]

If you wish for me to take it down, I will, but I thought I'd show this to you to let you know I used your animation for some help in mine. ^^; Your animation is just amazing, and it's AWESOME how you get such smooth animation! (even using your animation for reference, mine's STILL choppy! XP )
dreamitupfoever Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Has cry ever seen these before!? He should! You should be thanked for the amazing works you do of him.
GenevieveHigurashi Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
I love the style, I don't think you could've done better
mythical27 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
O.O you used kirito's moves :D
Cry is wielding the Elucidator and the Dark Repluser
mancan71 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hello there I'm here to ask if you can maybe help out a cry fanbase on the website "reddit". it's a place where you can post fan art or make discussions, but sadly it's dying. Is it alright if I link your art in the fanbase area for cry? full credit will be given to you and it will link right to your actual deveation. I will not steal art, I just wish to share it with the dying fanbase on that site.
Kiwa007 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure :) thatd actually be very nice, thank you :heart: :hug:
i hope it will help the fanbase there :w00t:
mancan71 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no problem. ^_^ you have a lot of cry art, and that's what that fanbase needs. :)

thank you so much. :) keep it up.
Castel-Eown Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Wish I could animate like that D:
Great job.
RPGSharpShooter Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Artist
I could watch this all day..
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