Nice Job, its clean and clear to see the action. It's been seen before so that's what makes this not completely original. Visual is amazing but I am guessing what other critiques might say is "color?" pffth you are aware of that though. It's simple and not too complicated. Technique is impressive needless to say, it is not too special. And since I watch too many cartoons with action it made a decent appeal.
Color would make an impact. Special effects would add on to the categories. And work a little more with drawing the back side of the hand.
This is done very well. First, the way you drew him is accurate to the proportions of the human body and etc... second, the motion is amazing. So smooth; very little frame skipping. It's obvious that this took some good effort...or maybe it wasn't that hard and you're just awesome that way ^^ The only constructive criticism I may have is the fact that there's a portion of it where the left arm isn't the same thickness as the rest of the lines.......but I don't know. Maybe that was intentional. I think coloring this would be a great idea. It's wonderful now, but color would add a whole other dimension to it :3 I'm sure Cry would be pleased if he saw this Great job!!
Oh my gosh, this is just so AWESOME! I love your animation!!!!
I hope you don't mind, but I took the WIP animation, imported into my photoshop, and used it as a base for my own animation. I give you credit for the animation itself. I just used my own character and used your animation for the basic movements. [link]
If you wish for me to take it down, I will, but I thought I'd show this to you to let you know I used your animation for some help in mine. Your animation is just amazing, and it's AWESOME how you get such smooth animation! (even using your animation for reference, mine's STILL choppy! XP )
hello there I'm here to ask if you can maybe help out a cry fanbase on the website "reddit". it's a place where you can post fan art or make discussions, but sadly it's dying. Is it alright if I link your art in the fanbase area for cry? full credit will be given to you and it will link right to your actual deveation. I will not steal art, I just wish to share it with the dying fanbase on that site.