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Crynime Poster by Kiwa007 Crynime Poster by Kiwa007
well...this took forever...

girls (from left to right): Weirdy, Kari, Mexie, Neko, Kiwa, Tuna, Dost

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my tumblr: [link] (if you´re interested in news about Crynime and can handle some of my personal rambles ^^; )

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Simply awesome.

Before i get to the actual critique, i want to say that you have progressed a lot in your art and i hope that this "Crynime" will come out.

So onto the actual review. First looks are amazing, it definitely has a great impact on the viewer. The colors also tend to fit all the characters and the contrasts of the other colors. All the people look accurately drawn. I see almost nothing wrong with this image. But there are things that bother me about this image. The poster appears a bit blurry which, for me, doesn't fit this image. Another thing is the massive title in the middle of the image, perhaps use a smaller font and maybe leave a larger spacing between them, example:
C R Y N I M E

Another thing, is that you could fill out more of the space on the actual image, not leave a lot of it blank.

However all in all, this is a great piece of art, looking forward to the anime.
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I like the lighting effects you have in this image, from the lighter hue in the center of the image to the off-light blue on the top right. I feel as though you could push the darkest darks on some of the characters than more of the background, though. The characters are lovely and well-drawn with lots of character, though I get the feeling that none of them are really connected in this picture because they stand out so vividly in the image. This could be fixed, if you choose to, by adjusting the hue of some of the characters (I don't know what program you use, but to put an overlay and adding effects of blue, or whatever colour you see fits best to the image would help tie everything in.

You also have a couple areas of confusion, where the 'N' in CRYNIME is touching the center girls ear, and on the top, Cry's hand is being slightly overlapped by another characters head.

As others have commented, the title in the center of the image doesn't do the poster justice. I believe that the image would be much better if you used a much crisper text and had it cover a wider surface.
if you look at the way things are lined, you can look at the entire shape of your characters. On the top is the main character, his head and shoulders give the illusion of a triangle being formed - as if he's all encompassing. Which is a good effect you've pulled off.
On the bottom is a smaller crew, I'm not sure how important they are. From the standpoint of someone who has just stumbled upon your artwork, they all strike me as extremely interesting characters, much more thought out than the four characters above who... look more important because of their size and positioning.
As well as these characters seeming less important to the story, the title being placed in such a peculiar place while destroying the umbrella effect earlier stated gives the image a sort of bottle neck feeling. The title is tightening around the image and focusing all the attention on it, rather than the rest of this beautiful image.


Things to focus on for sure, I would think...
Tying everything together to balance the image, which includes the general hue (be it minimal or not), darkness and light values (Some sharp whites instead of the perfectly white weapons you have)
If you wanted to go more technical into the sphere of light Cry is creating, you could create a back-lit effect on all the characters.

Of course, how you fix this is up to you. I'm very happy to have seen your art as it inspires me to try harder too. I wish you the best of luck in continuing your art ^^
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RandomGamerLOL Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AH! MY HEART! It cant take all the amazingness!! I think it's gonna exp- ! *dead*
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cutiepics Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014   Filmographer
what is crynime about? i mean i know its about cry, but what is the story line?
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NotAnArtist7890 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
It's set in the Cry universe, with, ya know, Virus!Cry and the Late Night Crew and all that. There's an awesome trailer on YouTube you should check out. I'm pumped for this to get started.
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cutiepics Featured By Owner May 9, 2014   Filmographer
i did, and ikr! i love cry so much and i cant wait to see it! c;
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RandomAxeOfKindness Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Crynime is gonna be so epic! Can already tell. :excited: 
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DragonLady2005 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I'm having a hard time not favoriting everything you've ever drawn.
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FearlessNightmare Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Who are the random chicks at the bottom? I thought this was about Cry and Friends....?
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RandomAxeOfKindness Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
I think they're the people helping to make Crynime. 
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Kikip45 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student Writer
Either they ARE his friends, or maybe they're just random fans that want to be on a Cry poster that will hang in someones room. 
Who knows?
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7Happy Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I think that too...
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:iconrandomnessaplenty:
RandomnessAplenty Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love this. Just one question though, is there a reason you put yourself in there? I thought this thing was about, you know, Cry? And some virus thing.
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nighthawk158 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
... You mean Virus!Cry...
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BrochachoTheNooblet Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That looks so cool. :iconhappyhappyplz:
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AzuraJae Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I will definitely pay money for this if this was a whole movie. I dont care how much it cost, I'm going to buy it. :Iw
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AthenaMuldrow Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
BEST MOTHA F***ING POSTER EVER!!!
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Anikayakushi Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so awesome, I can't contain my emotions. >w< I can't wait for it to come out! Yay for subscribing and watching both! I'd so want to voice act, but as the video update said, I'll wait for further details. *squeals* 
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Milk-n-Pork Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Looks like I have something to look forward to again. I SHALL BE WAITING xD
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bradlybeauchene Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Writer
omg have you guys seen the teaser yet! youtu.be/AGeo-9nyKO0
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Kichiara-Rosane Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So is this going to be an anime sometime? It looks cool! :D
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bradlybeauchene Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Writer

youtu.be/AGeo-9nyKO0

teaser of epicosity!

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Kichiara-Rosane Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thanks!
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Friendsofold Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welp... time for me to do fanart of fanart-ish... production.... YEA LET'S DO THIS SHIT!
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wolflove342 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
This is going to be epic. :iconmotherofgod-plz:
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JinxWolfMoon Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So is this a Virus Cry vs. Cry thing? AND is Mad Cry there? But I pretty sure Virus Cry is going to be REALLY SUPER inportant
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nighthawk158 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
I think so too. And I personally love virus cry.
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Frost-life Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I saw the teaser and it was epic!
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pewdiecry224 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
im so excited for this to happen!!!
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DinosandDragons Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG!!! I've lost count of how mant times i watched the teaser for this and i am SO EXCITED to see what amazingness you guys will put into this anime! "fangirl squeal!"
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LokittyL Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Same o/
I'm watching that video right now!
It's so............................So........................
AWESOME!
BEST THING EVER MADE!
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DinosandDragons Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I KNOW RIGHT?! I CAN'T WAIT TILL IT COMES OUT! :D
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Spider-Bagel Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you should make this and ACTUAL poster on your new shop! i'd so get it!
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:iconfredjazz:
fredjazz Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Are this a movie?
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ilovewolfz Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student Interface Designer
you always have amazing art :) why can't I be this good ;.;
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:icongio87:
gio87 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
so this cry is a you tube blogger just like pewdiepie or smosh?
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XxMistressMomoxX Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep.
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InokaUchiha Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
This is awesome!!! The only one missing is Raven though.... Jund - Raven= sadness
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Angelism98 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it but where is pewds??
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AkariKyoku Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Pewdie isn't there?? :noes:
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XxDarkSoulX Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Can't wait for Crynime!! ^^
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Voxollous Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
crynime!! i cant wait!!
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YamatoJay Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this!!
You are so talented :happybounce:

But i miss Ouka, this needs some OukaMocha ;^; ...
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Dylanmalone11 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Yes. Just. Yes.
If someone convince him to do his voice, then he will be a YOUTUBE star
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Aleude Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wooooooooow *.-___* this is your story or this is a game? *w*
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thewolfcouncil Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013   Filmographer
dude this is EPIC! XD
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GutTC Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Owait, does Battlestar count too? .o.
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CutiePandaCakes Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Because Cry has such an interesting character design and well, character, he'd be an amazing protagonist for an anime.
I mean, I don't see anime where the protagonist wears a mask to hide his identity and has alter egos that all have different masks, so yea
Amazing work as always Kiwa <3 It's awesome !
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DinosandDragons Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow i couldn't have summed it up better; you're completely right :D
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CutiePandaCakes Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thanks ! But seriously though, I don't understand why no one thinks of the things Cry though of, they're genius
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DinosandDragons Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right? :)
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DreamLandWarrior Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Found yhu
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