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Crynime Poster

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well...this took forever...

girls (from left to right): Weirdy, Kari, Mexie, Neko, Kiwa, Tuna, Dost

tumblr link: [link]
my tumblr: [link] (if you´re interested in news about Crynime and can handle some of my personal rambles ^^; )

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Cry´s YT channel: [link]
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like the lighting effects you have in this image, from the lighter hue in the center of the image to the off-light blue on the top right. I feel as though you could push the darkest darks on some of the characters than more of the background, though. The characters are lovely and well-drawn with lots of character, though I get the feeling that none of them are really connected in this picture because they stand out so vividly in the image. This could be fixed, if you choose to, by adjusting the hue of some of the characters (I don't know what program you use, but to put an overlay and adding effects of blue, or whatever colour you see fits best to the image would help tie everything in.

You also have a couple areas of confusion, where the 'N' in CRYNIME is touching the center girls ear, and on the top, Cry's hand is being slightly overlapped by another characters head.

As others have commented, the title in the center of the image doesn't do the poster justice. I believe that the image would be much better if you used a much crisper text and had it cover a wider surface.
if you look at the way things are lined, you can look at the entire shape of your characters. On the top is the main character, his head and shoulders give the illusion of a triangle being formed - as if he's all encompassing. Which is a good effect you've pulled off.
On the bottom is a smaller crew, I'm not sure how important they are. From the standpoint of someone who has just stumbled upon your artwork, they all strike me as extremely interesting characters, much more thought out than the four characters above who... look more important because of their size and positioning.
As well as these characters seeming less important to the story, the title being placed in such a peculiar place while destroying the umbrella effect earlier stated gives the image a sort of bottle neck feeling. The title is tightening around the image and focusing all the attention on it, rather than the rest of this beautiful image.


Things to focus on for sure, I would think...
Tying everything together to balance the image, which includes the general hue (be it minimal or not), darkness and light values (Some sharp whites instead of the perfectly white weapons you have)
If you wanted to go more technical into the sphere of light Cry is creating, you could create a back-lit effect on all the characters.

Of course, how you fix this is up to you. I'm very happy to have seen your art as it inspires me to try harder too. I wish you the best of luck in continuing your art ^^