LNC: Just Another Day

First of all, great job on this one <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I like it a lot.

Also this is my first critique. but here goes.

As for vision and impact, I thought they were both conveyed really well. I just like what I see and feel when I look at the piece in general.

I also liked the concept of the piece. Although the apocalypse theme is easy to find with this crew, I liked what you did with the idea (Jund and Snake at the back are cute).

I personally think your weakest part of this piece was the technique. The background seems slightly rushed. The buildings don't stand quite straight and it doesn't look intentional. But I do like the atmosphere it gives off. The anatomy for the people are generally okay except for the fact that there's something slightly off about red. I think it's mostly the head and the way her hair lies around her face. Also, (this is really getting into the minuscule details) Russ appears to have an extremely large forehead. It could be the way you positioned the hair. But again, that might be a tiny detail. Just keep in mind that sometimes a flaw in the drawing, regardless of how much you render the drawing, can result in a weaker looking piece overall <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Overall this is great. This is probably the speedpaint I rewatch the most on your channel. This is also an old piece, so idk how useful this critique would actually be, since you've improved a lot since this one. But I thought I could go for it anyways since I do like it so much.

Also, uh, hey. 'Sup.