The movement is great. Also their body postures as they move are also very well done. The only thing that bothers me (I see a lot) is when Pewdiepie looks to the side at Cry, the definition of his right eye (left from perspective) finishesshape of the head. Basically, if a person turns their head, the eye definition mustn't finish as if lined with the nose. I know you get that a lot in anime, but if you're going for a realistic style then you must be sure about the definition of the eye. That's the only thing I noticed, however the rest is great. 9/10 Bropoints
This is how they act on a day to day basis! plus its very closely related to the cry and pewdiepie slap. love it so much. i hate words. i love cry though... cry is worth all the words... FUCK YOU WORDS! i struggle with these critiques so damn much. I FUCKING HATE WORDS! XOXOXOXOXOX Kiwa i love you and all your work so much keep up the good work. and i wouldn't mind if you drew cry and pewdiepie being... "naughty" STILL NEED 18 WORDS! WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS PALABRAS(WORDS IN ESPANOL) WORDS PALABRAS 3 more words!
Even for a lazy animation, this is very amazing in itself. ;w; I bet a lot of people wish or dream to one day animate as amazingly as you can, bro. ^-^
The only thing that bothers me (I see a lot) is when Pewdiepie looks to the side at Cry, the definition of his right eye (left from perspective) finishesshape of the head. Basically, if a person turns their head, the eye definition mustn't finish as if lined with the nose. I know you get that a lot in anime, but if you're going for a realistic style then you must be sure about the definition of the eye.
That's the only thing I noticed, however the rest is great.
9/10 Bropoints
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